Friday, March 26, 2010

Blurbs

Concrete Angel (Martina Mcbride)
11 year old Emily stuck in a life of abuse, goes to school everyday trying to cover up the bruises and pain, but nobody even seems to care or notice. Teachers look away from her as if they see nothing wrong. Neighbors don’t even seem to hear her as she screams for help. By the time someone notices her predicament, it will be too late.
The Waitress (Atmosphere)
Tom, a seventy-year-old man living on the streets, visits a cafe daily to see a special waitress. She is disgusted with him and wont allow him to stay unless he buys something. Although he comes every day he never has the courage to talk to her and she never gives him the time of day. Little does she know that this vagrant is her father.
Cats in the Cradle (Harry Chapin)
Little boy wants to spend time with dad and wants to grow up to be just like his dad but his dad never has time for him and keeps putting him off. When the boy is grown, the roles are reversed and now his dad wants to talk to him and spend time with him but he is too busy. The little boy has become his dad and neither one got what they wanted.
The Baby (Shelton Blake)
The youngest child of Emma Jean Gadd received a phone call to get home quick to see dying mother before she passes away. He speeds through the night to get to her bedside, but he is too late and doesn’t have a chance to say goodbye.
There Goes My Life (Kenny Chesney)
Jamal, a high school star with great aspirations has to trade his dreams for that of his child's. He becomes a father too soon. He gave up his goals, but realized them later through his son who became a world famous doctor.

Thursday, March 18, 2010

Song Story

Song title: Concrete Angel

Song artist: Marina Mcbride

Link to song lyrics

Plot:

A school girl who is trapped in an abusive home and nobody seems to care. She wishes that she was never born than have to bear this secret burden she cant escape from.

Character:

School girl

Teacher

Neighbors

Conflict:

The girl packs her own lunch, wears the same clothes to school, hides her bruises and pain, and tries to rise above this world she lives in where nobody cares or notices. Her dreams give her wings to place and take her to a place where she can be loved as a concrete angel while remaining as hard as stone during the abuse.

Theme:

Abuse is damaging to the soul.

Ignoring the abuse, or keeping it a secret, can contribute to someone's fate.

Setting:

Walk way to school and school classroom.

In the middle of the night at home.

A place she goes to in her dreams.

Sunday, March 14, 2010

6-Word Memoirs (Top 10)

1. Wisdom is gained after great struggle.
2. Moving backwards while time moves forward.
3. When in doubt always look up.
4. What was I going to say?
5. Chocolate is a necessity of life.
6. Tired of being what others wanted.
7. Changed mind one too many times.
8. Afraid of what could have been.
9. Always was looking for a reason.
10. Don't wanna grow old and wrinkly.

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Grand Theft Poetry

The Dash of Life
Gravestones on the hill,
so many names,
so many lives,
gone.
It's not the date of birth
or of death
that matters.
It's the dash engraved between
death and birth that counts the most.
How do we choose to fill our dash
of life?
With sadness and fear,
or happiness and peace.
With meaningful relationships,
or bitterness and loneliness.
Will we have regrets
and unfulfilled dreams,
or will we have accomplished
our hearts desires.
Gravestones on the hill
marking life's lost,
but not erasing memories
left behind.